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Simonyys Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing

is the grammar in this sentence correct?

To Whom It May Concern

I, xxx. The employer of Ms yyy, she has been working for our family since dd-mmm-yyyy under the employment contract no.: 12345 as a domestic helper.

Ms yyy will take a Annual leave back to Indonesia from dd-mmm-yyyy to dd-mmm-yyyy and the flight schedule as follow:
Hong Kong - Indonesia: CX123 dd-mmm-yyyy
Indonesia - Hong Kong: CX456 dd-mmm-yyyy

Please provide necessary assist to Ms yyy for her relevant formalities done.

Thank you for your cooperation.
  

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To Whom It May Concern I, ***. am t he employer of Ms yy y. S he has been working for our family since dd-mmm-yyyy under the employment contract No.

  • To Whom It May Concern I, ***.
  • am t he employer of Ms yy y.
  • S he has been working for our family since dd-mmm-yyyy under the employment contract No.
  • 12345 as a domestic helper.
  • Ms yyy will take an nual leave to go back to Indonesia from dd-mmm-yyyy to dd-mmm-yyy y, and the her flight schedule is as follo ws : Hong Kong - Indonesia: CX123 dd-mmm-yyyy Indonesia - Hong Kong: CX456 dd-mmm-yyyy Please provide the necessary assista nce to Ms yyy for her with the relevant formalitie s.
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To Whom It May Concern

I, ***. am the employer of Ms yyy. She has been working for our family since dd-mmm-yyyy under the employment contract No. 12345 as a domestic helper.

Ms yyy will take annual leave to go back to Indonesia from dd-mmm-yyyy to dd-mmm-yyyy, and the her flight schedule is as follows
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Thanks for the correction. teechr

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