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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is the grammar in this sentence correct?

I surprised my peers by leaving Apple, which I co-founded and was destined to be the next big thing in Technology.
  

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Anonymous I surprised my peers by leaving Apple, which I co-founded and was destined to be the next big thing in Technology. It sounds as if I was destined to be the next big thing. To convey the intended meaning it needs another 'which': ...

  • Anonymous I surprised my peers by leaving Apple, which I co-founded and was destined to be the next big thing in Technology.
  • It sounds as if I was destined to be the next big thing.
  • To convey the intended meaning it needs another 'which': ...
  • Apple, which I co-founded and which was destined to be ...
  • CJ
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Anonymous I surprised my peers by leaving Apple, which I co-founded and was destined to be the next big thing in Technology.
It sounds as if I was destined to be the next big thing. To convey the intended meaning it needs another 'which':

... Apple, which I co-founded and which was destined to be ...

CJ
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Thanks a lot Jim! I appreciate your help. Emotion: nodding

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