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Save11tw Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is the grammar correct?

Hi everyone, I would appreciate some help on the sentences below:

This cool dad loves making awesome memories with the kids.
And keeps his wife happy by cleaning up the mess every time.

Is the grammar correct? Any way to make the second sentence shorter?
  

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Welcome to English Forums. Thank you for registering.

The first sentence is fine.
The second sentence needs a subject.
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Thanks for your answer!
Is the sentence below correct as well?

While keeping his wife very happy by cleaning up the mess afterwards every time.
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save11twWhile keeping his wife very happy by cleaning up the mess afterwards every time.
That is not a complete sentence. It is a fragment.

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