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Simonyys Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
is the grammar correct?
Dear xxx,
I am a policy holder of the xxx Bond Fund and the Bond number is xxx.
I would like to make a redemption of the Fund, please send me the relevant documents for redemption process by e-mail.
please debit the amount to my account number as follows:
Please contact me if you need more information.
Thanks for your cooperation.
I am a policy holder of the xxx Bond Fund and the Bond number is xxx.
I would like to make a redemption of the Fund, please send me the relevant documents for redemption process by e-mail.
please debit the amount to my account number as follows:
Please contact me if you need more information.
Thanks for your cooperation.
Top answer
Rather than say "to make a redemption," we would say that we want to redeem the bond. You sentence "please debit the amount to my account number as follows:" should begin with a capital letter. Additionally, you have a colon at the end of the sentence, but nothing after the colon.
- Rather than say "to make a redemption," we would say that we want to redeem the bond.
- You sentence "please debit the amount to my account number as follows:" should begin with a capital letter.
- Additionally, you have a colon at the end of the sentence, but nothing after the colon.
- Something has to follow the colon.
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Rather than say "to make a redemption," we would say that we want to redeem the bond.
You sentence "please debit the amount to my account number as follows:" should begin with a capital letter. Additionally, you have a colon at the end of the sentence, but nothing after the colon. Something has to follow the colon.
You sentence "please debit the amount to my account number as follows:" should begin with a capital letter. Additionally, you have a colon at the end of the sentence, but nothing after the colon. Something has to follow the colon.
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