Is the given advertisement written correctly. If yes, how can improve it.

You are acommerce graduate with 8 years of experience of keeping accounts. You want a job in some mnc or corporate house. Write an ad.

Situation wanted

A male , determined, hard working , result oriented commerce graduate with 8 years of experience of keeping accounts seeks job in mnc or corporate house. specialise in tally. Handsome salary expected with fringe benefits.

Please contact: abc -××××××××××