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Jackson6612 Posted 18 years ago
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is the following title good one?

0 Do you think the following title is a good one?02br
01b00Meadows of Childhood and Birth of a Materialistic/Pagan Man02b00 0-
  

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0It's trying to say too much. Usually a birth comes before childhood. 0-

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0It's trying to say too much. Usually a birth comes before childhood. 0-
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0 In childhood a person mostly thinks idealistically but as he grows old this world changes him into a materialistic person. Don't you think it;s kind of second birth for him? 0-
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0Usually you think of rebirth as a renewal, making the person better or more pure. You're talking about a transformation.02br
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00Meadows of childhood is nice - it seems happy and carefree. Can you think of another metaphor that represents materialism? Than you can have From the Meadows of Childhood to the [whatever] of Adulthood.02br
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00Or, since m
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01cite10Jackson661212cite10Do you think the following title is a good one?12br
11b10Meadows of Childhood and Birth of a Materialistic/Pagan Man12b12blockquote
10 No, but maybe you can come up with something in imitation of a similar title that's already been used: 01i00The Birth
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0 Thanks, GG and CJ. Can you suggest any title keeping in view my original title?02br
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00Barbara, What would you like to use in place of 01i00whatever02i00 in your suggested titles?02br
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00From the Meadows of Childhood to the [whatever] of Adulthood.02br
00From the Meadow to the [Whatever]: How the idealism of chi
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0I'm not feeling very creative today. If "meadows" makes you think of being carefee, what would make you think of commercialism. What about "From the Meadow to the Mall"? That has nice alliteration.0-
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