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Reyozan Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Is the following sentence well worded?
"And I hope my work will be a valuable contribution to the communications systems in general, and the efficiency of wireless communications in particular."
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There is no need for the comma after in general , but the addition of to [ and to the efficiency... ] will make it read much more smoothly.
- There is no need for the comma after in general , but the addition of to [ and to the efficiency...
- ] will make it read much more smoothly.
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There is no need for the comma after in general, but the addition of to [ and to the efficiency... ] will make it read much more smoothly.
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