Is the following sentence ok?
Good afternoon, please have a look at the following sentence and see if it sounds ok.
"Melissa, I have observed for quite some time now that your attitude and personality towards me become different when you are surrounded by intimidating people."
Thank you for your help.
Top answer
You can have an attitude towards someone , but you can't have a personality towards someone. Try to find another way to say it. The tone of this sentence is very formal and serious.
- You can have an attitude towards someone , but you can't have a personality towards someone.
- Try to find another way to say it.
- The tone of this sentence is very formal and serious.
- I assume that's what you want.
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You can have an attitude towards someone, but you can't have a personality towards someone.
Try to find another way to say it.
The tone of this sentence is very formal and serious. I assume that's what you want.
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