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Mentee Posted 14 years ago
Vocabulary

Is the following sentence correct / appropriate?

Kindly advise if the sentence is appropriate. I am trying to avoid repetition. Suggestions are welcome.His parents, Mr. John Smith and Mrs. Alicia Smith, once worked as teachers; the former at ABC High School and the latter at PQR High School.
  

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His parents, John and Alicia Smith, once worked as teachers , he at ABC High School and she at PQR High School.

— Mister Micawber

  • His parents, John and Alicia Smith, once worked as teachers , he at ABC High School and she at PQR High School.
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His parents, John and Alicia Smith, once worked as teachers, he at ABC High School and she at PQR High School.
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Thank you, Mister Micawber. Your suggestion sounds most appropriate. Emotion: smile
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