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Mentee Posted 14 years ago
Vocabulary

Is the following sentence appropriate?

Kindly advise on the following sentence. (A, B, C, etc. are names of places):He traveled to A, B, and C on Mondays, on Tuesdays to D, on Wednesdays to E, on Thursdays to F, on Fridays to G, and on Saturdays to H.
  

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Why did you reverse the word order after Mondays, Mentee? It makes it less successful.

— Mister Micawber

  • Why did you reverse the word order after Mondays, Mentee?
  • It makes it less successful.
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Why did you reverse the word order after Mondays, Mentee? It makes it less successful.
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Mister Micawber, thanks for answering. I get your point.He traveled to A, B, and C on Mondays, to D on Tuesdays, to E on Wednesdays, to F on Thursdays, to G on Fridays, and to H on Saturdays.
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Yes, that's easier to read.
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