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Amirarasteh Posted 14 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Is the following sentece correct?
Finally, the professor clearly opposes the last reason provided in the passage. While the passage states that it is not such a good idea, the professor casts doubt on it asserting that it is a feasible idea.
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Hello, amirasteh—and welcome to English Forums. The grammar is OK, but the sentence is rather clumsy and could use refining: Finally, the professor clearly opposes the last reason in the passa ge, asserting that it is instead a feasible idea.
- Hello, amirasteh—and welcome to English Forums.
- The grammar is OK, but the sentence is rather clumsy and could use refining: Finally, the professor clearly opposes the last reason in the passa ge, asserting that it is instead a feasible idea.
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Hello, amirasteh—and welcome to English Forums.
The grammar is OK, but the sentence is rather clumsy and could use refining:
Finally, the professor clearly opposes the last reason in the passage, asserting that it is instead a feasible idea.
The grammar is OK, but the sentence is rather clumsy and could use refining:
Finally, the professor clearly opposes the last reason in the passage, asserting that it is instead a feasible idea.
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