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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Attached excel document has the IBM recommended education plan for EDM-tool. Dave is working with EDM team regarding the details of the training budget and schedule.
  

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Here are my suggestions: The a ttached E xcel document has the IBM - recommended education plan for the EDM tool. Dave is working with the EDM team regarding the details of the training budget and schedule.

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  • Here are my suggestions: The a ttached E xcel document has the IBM - recommended education plan for the EDM tool.
  • Dave is working with the EDM team regarding the details of the training budget and schedule.
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The attached Excel document has the IBM-recommended education plan for the EDM tool. Dave is
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