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Creativeguru Posted 14 years ago
Grammar
Is the flow of the paragraph is correct?
The 19th Hole Golf Course Membership
An array of spectacular membership options for individuals, families and corporates. Just being a member of the 19th Hole will elevate your prestige. A true passionate golfer can’t be away from this golf course because the 19th hole is the nucleus where all golf aficionados convergence as this is one of the most desirable spots for playing golf.
After golfing enjoy the warm hospitality of our club house, bar and restaurant
At the longue you might bumped into the famous personalities
An array of spectacular membership options for individuals, families and corporates. Just being a member of the 19th Hole will elevate your prestige. A true passionate golfer can’t be away from this golf course because the 19th hole is the nucleus where all golf aficionados convergence as this is one of the most desirable spots for playing golf.
After golfing enjoy the warm hospitality of our club house, bar and restaurant
At the longue you might bumped into the famous personalities
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It is ok but there are some issues. "corporate" is normally an adjective but maybe it's also used as a noun where you live. The last sentence should be "might bump into famous people/celebrities".
- It is ok but there are some issues.
- "corporate" is normally an adjective but maybe it's also used as a noun where you live.
- The last sentence should be "might bump into famous people/celebrities".
- "the famous personalities" sounds completely wrong to me ( though you may sometimes hear TV personalities).
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It is ok but there are some issues. "corporate" is normally an adjective but maybe it's also used as a noun where you live. The last sentence should be "might bump into famous people/celebrities". "the famous personalities" sounds completely wrong to me ( though you may sometimes hear TV personalities).
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I am from India here are few queries from me
1. might bumped into....is using bumped is absolutely wrong English I will appreciate if you can elaborate little on this.
2. famous personalities - here I want to emphasis on big corporate personalities like CEOs, MD of the company and also film personalities
Thanks
1. might bumped into....is using bumped is absolutely wrong English I will appreciate if you can elaborate little on this.
2. famous personalities - here I want to emphasis on big corporate personalities like CEOs, MD of the company and also film personalities
Thanks
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1. Yes, it should be "bump into". However, when you bump into someone you meet him/her by chance so perhaps it would be better to use "see" or some other verb in place of "bump into".
2. It's still wrong (or at least unnatural in that context). CEOs are VIPs (very important person/people) rather than celebrities though. "famous people" would still work, in my opinion. The word celebritie
2. It's still wrong (or at least unnatural in that context). CEOs are VIPs (very important person/people) rather than celebrities though. "famous people" would still work, in my opinion. The word celebritie
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I totally agree with your view point
but can we use any other word instead of 'people'.
but can we use any other word instead of 'people'.
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