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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
Grammar

Is the first sentence awkward?

"Hats off to Zidane, Madrid's coaching staff and especially Ronaldo. Once again, he's proved himself a true legend of the game.
  

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anonymous Hats off to Zidane, Madrid's coaching staff , and especially Ronaldo. Once again, he's proved himself a true legend of the game. I suggest the Oxford comma there for clarity.

— Mister Micawber

  • anonymous Hats off to Zidane, Madrid's coaching staff , and especially Ronaldo.
  • Once again, he's proved himself a true legend of the game.
  • I suggest the Oxford comma there for clarity.
  • Your sentences are otherwise fine.
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anonymousHats off to Zidane, Madrid's coaching staff, and especially Ronaldo. Once again, he's proved himself a true legend of the game.

I suggest the Oxford comma there for clarity. Your sentences are otherwise fine.

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