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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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He won the Grand Melee for both the third and fourth years, so the next year his instructors placed him into the contest with students who were three years his senior, which was a Grand Melee that he also won
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He won the Grand Melee in his third and fourth years, so the next year his instructors entered him in the contest with students who were three years his senior. That Grand Melee he also won. You have to learn how to use simple sentences for emphasis.
- He won the Grand Melee in his third and fourth years, so the next year his instructors entered him in the contest with students who were three years his senior.
- That Grand Melee he also won.
- You have to learn how to use simple sentences for emphasis.
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He won the Grand Melee in his third and fourth years, so the next year his instructors entered him in the contest with students who were three years his senior. That Grand Melee he also won.
You have to learn how to use simple sentences for emphasis.
You have to learn how to use simple sentences for emphasis.
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