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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Is the end of this sentence properly worded?
Caramon did so, while Tanis and Dalamar looked on, the witnesses of Raistlin’s sacrifice to save the world.
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while Tanis and Dalamar looked on as witnesses.... Does this work for you?
- while Tanis and Dalamar looked on as witnesses....
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Suggestion: ....while Tanis and Dalamar looked on as witnesses....
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