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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is the end of this sentence properly worded?

After Kurnos became the Kingpriest, Fistandantilus worked to keep him in power by meeting with the new ruler and advising him.
  

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Its wording is fine. I'm just a bit confused about the him at the very end. It may be clear with preceding context, however.

  • Its wording is fine.
  • I'm just a bit confused about the him at the very end.
  • It may be clear with preceding context, however.
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Its wording is fine. I'm just a bit confused about the him at the very end. It may be clear with preceding context, however.
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Thanks for your help, the "him" is supposed to be Kurnos.

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