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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is the end of this sentence properly phrased?

Following the defeat, Kitiara returned to Flotsam and discovered that Tanis and his companions were leaving on a ship named the Perechon, which she also learned held Berem.
  

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cboutin3 held Berem. I think there's a better verb than held , unless you mean that Berem was being there against his/her will. Perhaps carried/was transporting might be better.

— Philip

  • cboutin3 held Berem.
  • I think there's a better verb than held , unless you mean that Berem was being there against his/her will.
  • Perhaps carried/was transporting might be better.
  • However, if your reader would not wonder about this, leave it.
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cboutin3held Berem.
I think there's a better verb than held, unless you mean that Berem was being there against his/her will. Perhaps carried/was transporting might be better. However, if your reader would not wonder about this, leave it.
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