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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is the end of this sentence correctly structured?

Upon Cathan and the band’s arrival in Govinna, Durinen entrusted Beldinas with the knowledge of where Pradian, a former lord of the city, had hid the Crown of Power during an Istaran civil war nearly a century earlier.
  

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" I prefer the other form of the past participle: hidden.

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  • " I prefer the other form of the past participle: hidden.
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To avoid problems with the possessive, I would begin with "Upon the arrival of Cathan and his band..."
I prefer the other form of the past participle: hidden.
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