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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is the end of this sentence correct, particularly the "them, where he..." part

As Xak Tsaroth began crumbling, Cathan hurled the Disks of Mishakal and the spellbook into a gaping whirlpool before jumping in after them, where he was presumably killed.
  

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Say eg As Xak Tsaroth began crumbling, Cathan hurled the Disks of Mishakal and the spellbook into a gaping whirlpool, where he was presumably killed after jumping in after them.

  • Say eg As Xak Tsaroth began crumbling, Cathan hurled the Disks of Mishakal and the spellbook into a gaping whirlpool, where he was presumably killed after jumping in after them.
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eg As Xak Tsaroth began crumbling, Cathan hurled the Disks of Mishakal and the spellbook into a gaping whirlpool, where he was presumably killed after jumping in after them.

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