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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Is the end of this correct?
Is the end of this correct or should I put "the academy...Lolth" in parentheses instead of have a comma before it? Meanwhile, Gromph was sending various spirits and demons to attack his sister and rival, Quenthel Baenre, the Mistress of Arach-Tinilith, the academy for priestesses of Lolth.
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Lolth" in parentheses Never use parentheses in narrative: parentheses indicate unimportant information. Meanwhile, Gromph was send ing spirit s and demons to attack his sister and rival, Quenthel Baenre, the Mistress of Arach-Tinilith, the academy for priestesses of Lolth.
- Lolth" in parentheses Never use parentheses in narrative: parentheses indicate unimportant information.
- Meanwhile, Gromph was send ing spirit s and demons to attack his sister and rival, Quenthel Baenre, the Mistress of Arach-Tinilith, the academy for priestesses of Lolth.
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cboutin3should I put "the academy...Lolth" in parenthesesNever use parentheses in narrative: parentheses indicate unimportant information.
Meanwhile, Gromph was sending spirits and demons to attack his sister and rival, Quenthel Baenre, the Mistress of Arach-Tinilith, the academy for priestesses of Lolth.
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