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Tamguatlay Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Is the comma after 'Then' needed?And should "First" be followed by "Second" rather than "Then'?

Do you know what Ryan did last weekend? He went to the beach with his family. First, Ryan built a huge sand castle. Then, he collected seashells and rocks. After that, he went swimming with his brother. Ryan had a wonderful time at the beach.

Is the comma after 'Then' needed? And should "First" be followed by "Second" rather than "Then'?

Thanks.
  

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tamguatlay Is the comma after 'Then' needed? No. tamguatlay should "First" be followed by "Second" rather than "Then'?

— Mister Micawber

  • tamguatlay Is the comma after 'Then' needed?
  • No.
  • tamguatlay should "First" be followed by "Second" rather than "Then'?
  • No, that is not necessary at all; in fact, it would sound a little odd.
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tamguatlayIs the comma after 'Then' needed?
No.
tamguatlayshould "First" be followed by "Second" rather than "Then'?
No, that is not necessary at all; in fact, it would sound a little odd.
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