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Rommel Posted 11 years ago
Grammar

Is the clause properly included?

Is the clause

He remembered the first day they met when he spilled coffee on her skirt, apologized, and bought her a new shirt until they became friends and then lovers.
  

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Until is incorrectly used. My suggestion: He remembered the first day they met when he spilled coffee on her skirt, apologized, and bought her a new skirt . Later they became friends and then lovers.

  • Until is incorrectly used.
  • My suggestion: He remembered the first day they met when he spilled coffee on her skirt, apologized, and bought her a new skirt .
  • Later they became friends and then lovers.
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Until is incorrectly used. My suggestion: He remembered the first day they met when he spilled coffee on her skirt, apologized, and bought her a new skirt. Later they became friends and then lovers.

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