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Sknew Posted 10 years ago
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Is the below Content correct ?

1. Consider my total years of experience(8 yrs) as well as my performance in this project for the past 4.5 years. Kindly acknowledge my effort and highly requesting for promotion this time.

2. I Would like to face challenges and changes that would help me in gaining new opportunities. Readily looking forward for onsite opportunities. Please initiate visa processing of mine.
  

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sknew Is the below Content correct ? No. I have 8 years of experience, including my performance on this project for the last 4½ years, and I would like to request your consideration of my promotion.

— Mister Micawber

  • sknew Is the below Content correct ?
  • No.
  • I have 8 years of experience, including my performance on this project for the last 4½ years, and I would like to request your consideration of my promotion.
  • I would like to face new challenges, and I am looking forward to onsite opportunities.
  • Please initiate processing of my visa.
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sknew Is the below Content correct ?
No.

I have 8 years of experience, including my performance on this project for the last 4½ years, and I would like to request your consideration of my promotion.

I would like to face new challenges, and I am looking forward to onsite opportunities. Please initiate processing of my visa.
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Thank you sir..

Instead of starting, I have 8 years of experience,
I want different words, please help
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sknewInstead of starting, I have 8 years of experience, I want different words,
What do you think is wrong with that? Give us your suggestion.
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