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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Is the beginning of this sentence with the two 'both' phrases correct?
When a force of dragons, both chromatic and metallic, and knights, both Dark and Solamnic, assembled to journey to the Abyss and confront Chaos, the Father of All and of Nothing, in a final battle to save Krynn, Flare was reunited with her beloved rider.
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When a force of chromatic and metallic dragons and Dark and Solamnic knights assembled to journey to the Abyss and confront Chaos, the Father of All and of Nothing, in a final battle to save Krynn, Flare was reunited with her beloved rider.
- When a force of chromatic and metallic dragons and Dark and Solamnic knights assembled to journey to the Abyss and confront Chaos, the Father of All and of Nothing, in a final battle to save Krynn, Flare was reunited with her beloved rider.
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When a force of chromatic and metallic dragons and Dark and Solamnic knights assembled to journey to the Abyss and confront Chaos, the Father of All and of Nothing, in a final battle to save Krynn, Flare was reunited with her beloved rider.
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Thanks, but would this revision work too? When a force of Dark Knights and chromatic dragons joined with a group of Solamnic Knights and metallic dragons to journey to the Abyss and confront Chaos, the Father of All and of Nothing, in a final battle to save Krynn, Flare was reunited with her beloved rider.
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