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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Is the "aid the return of..." part properly worded?

FYI- Ansalon is the continent and Solamnia is a specific country. Jenna granted Coryn use of her manor and laboratory in Palanthas, and the young mage immediately went there to study, to develop her unique skills, and to aid the return of Ansalon, and especially Solamnia, to standards of law, justice, and order that had been all but forgotten.
  

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It looks fine. Suggest "law, justice and order" without the comma. ) d

  • It looks fine.
  • Suggest "law, justice and order" without the comma.
  • ) d
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It looks fine.
Suggest "law, justice and order" without the comma. (You might want it arranged as "justice, law and order".)
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