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Age95 Posted 9 years ago
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Is that sentence correct?

Now, this report will focus on two line graphs, originally published in "The Economist" on 5th September 2015 and titled "War Worries": one showing the xxxx and one showing the xxx between 1995 and 2015, with 1995 being a base year.

  

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I would probably say "one showing ... ". Be aware that, as written, "the xxxx" is not (or not clearly) within the scope of "between 1995 and 2015".

  • I would probably say "one showing ...
  • ".
  • Be aware that, as written, "the xxxx" is not (or not clearly) within the scope of "between 1995 and 2015".
  • I'm not sure if that is what you intend.
  • I would personally italicise The Economist.
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I would probably say "one showing ... and the other showing ...".

Be aware that, as written, "the xxxx" is not (or not clearly) within the scope of "between 1995 and 2015". I'm not sure if that is what you intend.

I would personally italicise The Economist.

It is hard to judge "Now, ..." without seeing the full context. It would be odd if that was the very start of the

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