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Jetson Posted 14 years ago
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This strategy clearly requires the telecoms to implement it where one of its orders is the implementation of SIM registration process.
  

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Hard to judge, since the topic is rather arcane, but I suggest that this would be clearer: This strategy clearly requires the telecoms to implement it, since one of its orders is for the SIM registration process.

  • Hard to judge, since the topic is rather arcane, but I suggest that this would be clearer: This strategy clearly requires the telecoms to implement it, since one of its orders is for the SIM registration process.
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Hard to judge, since the topic is rather arcane, but I suggest that this would be clearer:

This strategy clearly requires the telecoms to implement it, since one of its orders is for the SIM registration process.

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