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Firstly, It's so nice to live in Finland. For instance, the healthcare in Finland is one of the best of the world and Finland has also a high school system. In general, it's possible to have a good oldness, because every one of us have some kind of pension here.

On the other hand, there is unemployment and at the same time a labour shortage here. That is itself a contradiction. A case in point; All of the medical students will get employed quickly after study time but for example in some trades have a high oversupply.

All good things for a good life - who could expect more?
  

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First , It's so nice to live in Finland. For instance, the healthcare in Finland is one of the best in the world and Finland also has a (missing adjective) high school system. ) In general, it's possible to have a good retirement , because every one of us have some kind of pension here .

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  • First , It's so nice to live in Finland.
  • For instance, the healthcare in Finland is one of the best in the world and Finland also has a (missing adjective) high school system.
  • ) In general, it's possible to have a good retirement , because every one of us have some kind of pension here .
  • On the other hand, there is unemployment and at the same time a labour shortage here.
  • That is in itself a contradiction.
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First, It's so nice to live in Finland. For instance, the healthcare in Finland is one of the best in the world and Finland also has a (missing adjective) high school system. (You used first, so the reader expects "second", "third", etc.) In general, it's possible to have a good retirement, because every one of us
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