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Tafin Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is that correct?

First off, the common delusion is that only secondary school students will succeed in life. I don't believe that! To my mind students in a vocational school will succeed better in life than secondary school students. As far-fetched as it may sound! They'll end up, for example: a plumber, a builder, an electrician or a smith. I believe they'll perhaps get employed faster than we. In our case, we have to continue our studying after secondary school to university or to university of applied sciences. After that, we would be an eye specialist, a psychologist, a teacher or an army officer, for instance.

However, the academic achievement isn't necessary to survive in life. But I'm sure it's good to study more and more in current society that you'll get work one day. Then again, if you are studied many years or you aren't study at all and you don't have get a job you can only blame yourself! Trust me.

All things considered, it's stands to reason, doesn't it? that if you decide to get along without education. It's okay. Don't think that only some kind of title will be decide your future. You can always affect your career as well as you know. For example, you can set up your own business one day. In my opinion, if you ask me hands-on experience is much better than theoretical knowledge.
  

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Hi, It helps if you tell us the topic or question that you are going to discuss. What is it? Clive

  • Hi, It helps if you tell us the topic or question that you are going to discuss.
  • What is it?
  • Clive
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Hi,

It helps if you tell us the topic or question that you are going to discuss.
What is it?


Clive
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Oh sorry, By the way the topic is "Is academic achievement necessary in order to be successful in life?".
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Hi,
Your essay structure and organization need work. Has your teacher taught you yet how to organize an essay?

However, I'm just going to comment a bit on your use of English.

Overall, you are writing as if you are tal
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Very useful tips, thanks a lot!

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