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Once Tol and the group of warriors arrived at the farming fields that surrounded Juramona, they discovered that Pakin soldiers had attacked and slaughtered many of the working peasants and forced the others to flee into the imperial town. The small band was then assaulted by a force of Pakins that had been waiting in the fields to ambush the Ackal soldiers. With the arrival of reinforcements from Juramona, Odovar and his men defeated the Pakins. During the battle, Tol once again proved his worth by assisting Egrin in the defeat and capture of the Pakin noble Vakka Zan. Following this victory, Odovar and the other Ackal warriors, as well as Tol, were able to finally enter Juramona.
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When Tol and the warriors arrived at the farms surrounding Juramona, they discovered that Pakin soldiers had slaughtered many of the peasants and forced the others to flee into the imperial town. The small band was then assaulted by a force of Pakins who had been waiting to ambush the Ackal soldiers. With the arrival of reinforcements from Juramona, Odovar and his men defeated the Pakins.
- When Tol and the warriors arrived at the farms surrounding Juramona, they discovered that Pakin soldiers had slaughtered many of the peasants and forced the others to flee into the imperial town.
- The small band was then assaulted by a force of Pakins who had been waiting to ambush the Ackal soldiers.
- With the arrival of reinforcements from Juramona, Odovar and his men defeated the Pakins.
- During the battle, Tol once again proved his worth by assisting Egrin in the capture of the Pakin noble Vakka Zan.
- Following this victory, Tol, Odovar and the other Ackal warriors entered Juramona at last.
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When Tol and the warriors arrived at the farms surrounding Juramona, they discovered that Pakin soldiers had slaughtered many of the peasants and forced the others to flee into the imperial town. The small band was then assaulted by a force of Pakins who had been waiting to ambush the Ackal soldiers. With the arrival of reinforcements from Juramona, Odovar and his men defeated the Pakins. Durin
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