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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is "take" correct in this context?

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Please take look at this sentence. Is "take" correct in this context? An is the underlined "will" necessary?

You will have a chance to take another loan and receive money in your bank account, until you will reach the predetermined credit limit.


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"will" is wrong. I would say "take out another loan". I wonder whether "and receive money in your bank account" is totally necessary.

— GPY

  • "will" is wrong.
  • I would say "take out another loan".
  • I wonder whether "and receive money in your bank account" is totally necessary.
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"will" is wrong. I would say "take out another loan". I wonder whether "and receive money in your bank account" is totally necessary.
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