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Anonymous Posted 12 years ago
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Is such wording okay in English?

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Does this sentence look natural and okay?

Johnny has posted an information on his http://www.facebook.com/ profile (entry made on July 15, 2013) that he arrived in Berlin in order to move our son to England.
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Johnny posted on his Facebook profile July 15, 2013 that he arrived in Berlin in order to take our son to England.

  • Johnny posted on his Facebook profile July 15, 2013 that he arrived in Berlin in order to take our son to England.
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Johnny posted on his Facebook profile July 15, 2013 that he arrived in Berlin in order to take our son to England.

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