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Anonymous Posted 11 years ago
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Is "stated" and "who" the best options here?

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Are "stated" and "who" the best options here? Or something else will make the sentence better?

He stated disjointed and inadequate phrases and that it was his girlfriend and her father who did this all.

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The whole front of this sentence needs rewording. And a better verb, yes. For example: His words, disjointed and inadequate, blamed everything on his girl friend and her father.

— Doctor D

  • The whole front of this sentence needs rewording.
  • And a better verb, yes.
  • For example: His words, disjointed and inadequate, blamed everything on his girl friend and her father.
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The whole front of this sentence needs rewording. And a better verb, yes. For example:

His words, disjointed and inadequate, blamed everything on his girl friend and her father.
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