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Anonymous Posted 14 years ago
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Is punctuation ok?

Hello, could you please help me with this tricky punctuation Emotion: smile Is it right?

"Could you please have a look and tell if everything is correct or, if not, what should be changed/added/deleted."

Thank you.
  

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Hi, could you please help me with this tricky punctuation Is it right? "Could you please have a look and tell me if everything is correct or, if not, what should be changed , added or deleted ? " Actually, your use of 'and' and 'or' is still awkward.

— Clive

  • Hi, could you please help me with this tricky punctuation Is it right?
  • "Could you please have a look and tell me if everything is correct or, if not, what should be changed , added or deleted ?
  • " Actually, your use of 'and' and 'or' is still awkward.
  • I suggest "Could you please have a look and tell me if everything is correct ?
  • If not, what should be changed , added or deleted ?
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Hi,

could you please help me with this tricky punctuation Is it right?

"Could you please have a look and tell me
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Could you please have a look and tell me if everything is correct, or if not, what should be changed, added or deleted?
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Thank you very much, you are great!
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