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Creativeguru Posted 10 years ago
Grammar
is punctuation correct?
On the same day, a new computer set, sponsored by Rtn. Deven Busa and Rtn. Prakash Sarpotdar was donated to Zhilla Parishad school, Rampur, Tal. Murbad with the auspicious hands of DGE Dr. Chandrashekhar Kolvekar.
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No, it needs another comma after "Rtn. Prakash Sarpotdar". "with" seems to be the wrong preposition, and "with the auspicious hands of" is very odd.
- No, it needs another comma after "Rtn.
- Prakash Sarpotdar".
- "with" seems to be the wrong preposition, and "with the auspicious hands of" is very odd.
- "computer set" is also a bit odd.
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No, it needs another comma after "Rtn. Prakash Sarpotdar".
"with" seems to be the wrong preposition, and "with the auspicious hands of" is very odd.
"computer set" is also a bit odd.
"with" seems to be the wrong preposition, and "with the auspicious hands of" is very odd.
"computer set" is also a bit odd.
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