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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Is option 1 worded correctly? Or should it be option 2?
1. In 421 AC, a massive storm swept across all of Ansalon that signaled the beginning of the War of Souls.
2. In 421 AC, a massive storm that signaled the beginning of the War of Souls swept across all of Ansalon.
2. In 421 AC, a massive storm that signaled the beginning of the War of Souls swept across all of Ansalon.
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The first is unnatural, the second, ungainly. "
- The first is unnatural, the second, ungainly.
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The first is unnatural, the second, ungainly. Maybe, "In 421 AC, a massive storm swept across all of Ansalon, a storm that signaled the beginning of the War of Souls."
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