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Pilita Posted 21 years ago
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0 Could you please check my sentences?Are they complete sentences or sound ok.I'm still struggling with my english.Thanks 02 br
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00 1.In contrast, Ernesto and Alberto found out that the few upper class—capitalists—have a higher quality of life. 02 br
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00 2.Wrestling with these problems is what drive Ernesto and Alberto to a journey of self-discovery. 02 br
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00 3.Alberto and Ernesto gained a face-to-face experience with social classes, and exploitation that led them on a journey of self-discovery. 02 br
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00 4.Throughout the trip, Ernesto and Alberto discovered the reality of a land filled with suffering, oppression, and injustice. (I put this sentence in my intro, so Do I have to talk about these issuse, even know MY thesis is :. Alberto and Ernesto gained a face-to-face experience with social classes, and exploitation that led them on a journey of self-discovery. 0-
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00 1.In contrast, Ernesto and Alberto found out that the few upper class—capitalists—have a higher quality of life. 02 br
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00 2.Wrestling with these problems is what drive Ernesto and Alberto to a journey of self-discovery. 02 br
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00 3.Alberto and Ernesto gained a face-to-face experience with social classes, and exploitation that led them on a journey of self-discovery. 02 br
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00 4.Throughout the trip, Ernesto and Alberto discovered the reality of a land filled with suffering, oppression, and injustice. (I put this sentence in my intro, so Do I have to talk about these issuse, even know MY thesis is :. Alberto and Ernesto gained a face-to-face experience with social classes, and exploitation that led them on a journey of self-discovery. 0-
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0 JTT: 02 br 02 br 00 Hi, Pilita. I've put all corrections in capitals. 02 br 02 br 00 Could you please check my sentences?
- 0 JTT: 02 br 02 br 00 Hi, Pilita.
- I've put all corrections in capitals.
- 02 br 02 br 00 Could you please check my sentences?
- Are they complete sentences AND [or] DO THEY sound ok.
- I'm still struggling with my [e]English.
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0 JTT: 02 br
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00 Hi, Pilita. I've put all corrections in capitals. 02 br
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00 Could you please check my sentences? Are they complete sentences AND [or] DO THEY sound ok. I'm still struggling with my [e]English. Thanks. 02 br
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00 1.In contrast, Ernesto and Alberto found out that the few upper class—capitalists—have a
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00 Hi, Pilita. I've put all corrections in capitals. 02 br
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00 Could you please check my sentences? Are they complete sentences AND [or] DO THEY sound ok. I'm still struggling with my [e]English. Thanks. 02 br
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00 1.In contrast, Ernesto and Alberto found out that the few upper class—capitalists—have a
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