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JosephineinJapan Posted 18 years ago
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is my writing ok
To those people who have helped me with my english writing for my company' s HP, I really appreciate all of your kind help.
Lot of kind persons have corrected some grammatical errors in my writing, so I think my stuff is generally ok now, just I am not sure if it is 'professional' enough for a company's homepage. Any one would check it for me would be really appreciated.
About us : *** Trading devotes to providing quality-assurance chemicals with more than 20 years of experience. With the product lines ranging from*****, mainly imported from our select suppliers in China. Being a dynamic and expanding company with headquarters in Tokyo, a branch office in Shanghai, the firm and long partnership in Mainland China gives us a distinctive advantage over our competitors. We also pride ourselves in having a team of well-educated young professionals, drive by a mutual passion to make the role of chemistry, do more good in the world.
Company History: The company has been established since 1988. The mandate of the company is to utilize increasing and various Chinese fertilizer resources to serve Japan marketplace. In 2000, with the expansion of the company, *** Trading moved into a new office building and broadened its business to include the importation of Chinese chemicals. After years of efforts to build strong sales channels for our suppliers, a branch office that specializes in chemicals was founded in 2007. Soon, in the following year, another affiliate was established in Shanghai, with an expectation of making the fast growth of the Chinese chemical market highly accessible from the worldwide marketplace.
I know this stuff must bore lots of people, well, I hope I could reciprocate a bit as well. Just name it!!
Many thanks.
Joe
Lot of kind persons have corrected some grammatical errors in my writing, so I think my stuff is generally ok now, just I am not sure if it is 'professional' enough for a company's homepage. Any one would check it for me would be really appreciated.
About us : *** Trading devotes to providing quality-assurance chemicals with more than 20 years of experience. With the product lines ranging from*****, mainly imported from our select suppliers in China. Being a dynamic and expanding company with headquarters in Tokyo, a branch office in Shanghai, the firm and long partnership in Mainland China gives us a distinctive advantage over our competitors. We also pride ourselves in having a team of well-educated young professionals, drive by a mutual passion to make the role of chemistry, do more good in the world.
Company History: The company has been established since 1988. The mandate of the company is to utilize increasing and various Chinese fertilizer resources to serve Japan marketplace. In 2000, with the expansion of the company, *** Trading moved into a new office building and broadened its business to include the importation of Chinese chemicals. After years of efforts to build strong sales channels for our suppliers, a branch office that specializes in chemicals was founded in 2007. Soon, in the following year, another affiliate was established in Shanghai, with an expectation of making the fast growth of the Chinese chemical market highly accessible from the worldwide marketplace.
I know this stuff must bore lots of people, well, I hope I could reciprocate a bit as well. Just name it!!
Many thanks.
Joe
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About Us : With over 20 years of experience, *** Trading is committed to providing quality- assured chemicals , with product lines ranging from **** to ****, mainly imported from our select suppliers in China. We are a dynamic , expanding company with headquarters in Tokyo and a branch office in Shanghai . Our tested partnership in mainland China gives us a distinct advantage over our competitors.
- About Us : With over 20 years of experience, *** Trading is committed to providing quality- assured chemicals , with product lines ranging from **** to ****, mainly imported from our select suppliers in China.
- We are a dynamic , expanding company with headquarters in Tokyo and a branch office in Shanghai .
- Our tested partnership in mainland China gives us a distinct advantage over our competitors.
- We also pride ourselves on our team of well-educated young professionals, driven by a shared passion to help chemistry do more good in the world.
- Company History: **** Trading was established in 1988 , with the mission to bring more and different Chinese fertilizers to the Japanese market .
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About Us: With over 20 years of experience, *** Trading is committed to providing quality-assured chemicals, with product lines ranging from **** to ****, mainly imported from our select suppliers in China. We are a dynamic, expanding company with headquarters in Tokyo and a branch office in Shanghai. Our tested partnersh
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Thank you so much.
It must have taken you lots of time.
I really appreciate your help.
Joe.
It must have taken you lots of time.
I really appreciate your help.
Joe.
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