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The love of a sister
As strong as a hurricane, deep as the ocean,
Wide as a river, tough as nails.
The love of a sister, o the joy it brings,
In my life there is no other, as important as she.
My sister and me, the bond we have,
It can never be broken, no matter the force.
You can’t break us apart, with the love we have.
No matter the distance apart, she’s always in the heart.
When sisters come together, nothing is impossible, for we are unstoppable.
Sisters lift up the other, no matter how low they are,
Sisters strive for the other, even when there is pain.
They know what is best for the other, and sometimes it’s hard,
But in the end we are stronger, stronger than before.
It’s so delightful, to see your sister smile,
Knowing she is happy is the others own happiness.
As strong as a hurricane, deep as the ocean,
Wide as a river, tough as nails.
The love of a sister, o the joy it brings,
In my life there is no other, as important as she.
My sister and me, the bond we have,
It can never be broken, no matter the force.
You can’t break us apart, with the love we have.
No matter the distance apart, she’s always in the heart.
When sisters come together, nothing is impossible, for we are unstoppable.
Sisters lift up the other, no matter how low they are,
Sisters strive for the other, even when there is pain.
They know what is best for the other, and sometimes it’s hard,
But in the end we are stronger, stronger than before.
It’s so delightful, to see your sister smile,
Knowing she is happy is the others own happiness.
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A better version would be like: Strong like a hurricane, deep like the ocean Wide like a river, tough like a nail. The love of a sister, o the joy it beings, No other in my life, as important as she. pain.....
- A better version would be like: Strong like a hurricane, deep like the ocean Wide like a river, tough like a nail.
- The love of a sister, o the joy it beings, No other in my life, as important as she.
- pain.....
- happiness.
- This should be 100% correct at least grammatically.
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A better version would be like:
Strong like a hurricane, deep like the ocean
Wide like a river, tough like a nail.
The love of a sister, o the joy it beings,
No other in my life, as important as she.
Me and my sister, the bond we have,
It is unbreakable, no matter the force
You can't break us apart, she is always in my heart
When sisters.......................
Strong like a hurricane, deep like the ocean
Wide like a river, tough like a nail.
The love of a sister, o the joy it beings,
No other in my life, as important as she.
Me and my sister, the bond we have,
It is unbreakable, no matter the force
You can't break us apart, she is always in my heart
When sisters.......................
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