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Anonymous Posted 15 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing

Is my thesis okay?

I am writing a contrast essay, and would like to know if the following is a good thesis or if it needs to be more specific.

There are two approaches to anxiety management; a holistic approach and the drug therapy approach. Although each approach to anxiety targets the same symptomes they both have a very different approaches and outcomes.
  

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Hi, Much depends on the level you are writing at. eg 9th grade in High School? eg A Master's level university course?

  • Hi, Much depends on the level you are writing at.
  • eg 9th grade in High School?
  • eg A Master's level university course?
  • Your essay will be judged differently in each case.
  • ( Check your spelliing ) Clive
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Hi,

Much depends on the level you are writing at.

eg 9th grade in High School?

eg A Master's level university course?

Your essay will be judged differently in each case.

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