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Yoodle15 Posted 14 years ago
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Is my sentence wordy?

"When Warrior wrote this personal essay, it had been a long time since she had been a child living in White Breast Flats."

How can I change it if it is wordy?
  

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Long before Warrior wrote this personal essay, she had left her childhood and White Breast Flats.

  • Long before Warrior wrote this personal essay, she had left her childhood and White Breast Flats.
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Long before Warrior wrote this personal essay, she had left her childhood and White Breast Flats.

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