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Mosja Posted 7 years ago
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Is my sentence natural? Heading to a department store in Essex, UK

It is hard to find shopping centres in Essex and we have to head to Thurrock Seaside and it is very far from Wickford.

  

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mosja It is hard to find shopping centres in Essex and we have to head to Thurrock Seaside and it is very far from Wickford. Not bad; I would use 'which' rather than 'it is' and 'a long way' rather than 'very far' as it sounds more natural. Also, do you mean 'Lakeside', not 'Seaside'?

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  • mosja It is hard to find shopping centres in Essex and we have to head to Thurrock Seaside and it is very far from Wickford.
  • Not bad; I would use 'which' rather than 'it is' and 'a long way' rather than 'very far' as it sounds more natural.
  • Also, do you mean 'Lakeside', not 'Seaside'?
  • It is very hard to find shopping centres in Essex and we have to head to Thurrock Lakeside, which is a long way from Wickford.
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mosjaIt is hard to find shopping centres in Essex and we have to head to Thurrock Seaside and it is very far from Wickford.

Not bad; I would use 'which' rather than 'it is' and 'a long way' rather than 'very far' as it sounds more natural.

Also, do you mean 'Lakeside', not 'Seaside'?

It is very hard to find shopping centres in Essex and we have

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