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Uktous Posted 17 years ago
Grammar

Is my sentence misleading?

Sentence:
I completed the final year project, using computer software SPSS, which requires me to analyze the behaviors of 50 people.

Hi,

My final year project requires me to analyze the behaviors of 50 people.

Is the bove sentence misleading?

Is the above sentence misleading that the computer software SPSS requires me to analyze the behaviors of 50 people?
  

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You have put the "SPSS" part set off by commas, so that helps, but there would be no problem with the sentence at all if you simply reversed the order: I completed the final year project, which require d me to analyze the behaviors of 50 people, using the computer software SPSS.

  • You have put the "SPSS" part set off by commas, so that helps, but there would be no problem with the sentence at all if you simply reversed the order: I completed the final year project, which require d me to analyze the behaviors of 50 people, using the computer software SPSS.
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You have put the "SPSS" part set off by commas, so that helps, but there would be no problem with the sentence at all if you simply reversed the order:

I completed the final year project, which required me to analyze the behaviors of 50 people, using the computer software SPSS.
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