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Boomkack Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

is my sentence correct (Q)

"She stated that she wants to visit the famous russian bath during her stay in Russia in the special request form"
  

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No. You have a few errors. I also suggest a more natural word order.

  • No.
  • You have a few errors.
  • I also suggest a more natural word order.
  • eg On her special request form, she stated that she wants to visit the famous Russian baths during her stay in Russia.
  • Do you really need to say 'in Russia'?
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No.
You have a few errors. I also suggest a more natural word order.
eg On her special request form, she stated that she wants to visit the famous Russian baths during her stay in Russia.

Do you really need to say 'in Russia'?
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yes i know but i couldn't think of anything else then russia, just wanted to know if i can put "in+country name" at the end of the sentence thanks tho

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