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Baseri Posted 14 years ago
Letter Writing

is my sentence correct, dear friends?

Dear Professor F.,
Hope all is going well. I have to pass FEM course as a basic course this term (I attend to your class 2 semester ago as a open student),
If you let me I want to hold a Software training class before/after your FEM Class for the classmates, and I need your help and guide. I know this issue is not related to you directly but I hope to have your support.
I have training experience of the following softwars:
Catia (related mudules to mechanics)
Solid works
Visual nastran 4D
Adams
Abaqus
My physical condition is not ideal for teaching now but I know that I can transmit Contents to students very good.
Finally, I would really appreciate it if you guide me.
Thanks in advance.
Best regards
  

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, I hope all is going well. I have to pass FEM course as a basic course this term (I attended to your class 2 semesters ago as a open student). If you allow me I want to hold a Software training class before or after your FEM Class for the other classmates, and I need your help and guidance.

  • , I hope all is going well.
  • I have to pass FEM course as a basic course this term (I attended to your class 2 semesters ago as a open student).
  • If you allow me I want to hold a Software training class before or after your FEM Class for the other classmates, and I need your help and guidance.
  • I know this issue is not related to you directly, but I hope to have your support.
  • I have training experience in the following softwars: Catia (related mudules to mechanics) Solid works Visual nastran 4D Adams Abaqus My physical condition is not ideal for teaching right now but I know that I can transmit the content to students very good.
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Hi Baseri,
I corrected your letter as seen below:

Dear Professor F.,
I hope all is going well. I have to pass FEM course as a basic course this term (I attended to your class 2 semesters ago as a open student).
If you allow me I want to hold a Software training class before or after your FEM Class for the other classmates, and I need your help and guidance. I know this issue i

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