It doesn't quite work because "they" has no explicit antecedent. "Dream" is a verb, and it needs a noun. The reader stops at "they" and thinks "who"?
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It doesn't quite work because "they" has no explicit antecedent. "Dream" is a verb, and it needs a noun. The reader stops at "they" and thinks "who"?