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Indeed, the scenario of mobility and material hardships in prison would drive potential offenders from illegal acts, directing them to become fruitful citizens.
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It's correct grammar, but I don't understand what the writer is trying to say. What does the scenario of mobility mean? Clive
- It's correct grammar, but I don't understand what the writer is trying to say.
- What does the scenario of mobility mean?
- Clive
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It's correct grammar, but I don't understand what the writer is trying to say.
What does the scenario of mobility mean?
Clive
0I would think that people in jail would be happy to get a chance to get out of jail and work somewhere else.
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Indeed, the need to work outside prison, together with the material hardships in prison, would deter potential offenders from illegal acts, directing them to become fruitful citizens.
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