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Hi, Thank you very much for being the first one for bringing me the marriage proposal from your close relative. Generally referring any proposal is indeed a very big responsibility. Even close relatives may not come forward and recommend any proposal. But you did it.
I would like to say a big thanks for having confidence on me. I am really happy that I am in the good books of my sister. Thank you so much for being so supportive. Regardless of the end result, gaining your confidence keeps me more happy.

Doctor D · Accepted Answer

There is some confusion here. Are you receiving a marriage proposal? Or are you yourself proposing marriage to another? I am assuming the first, but the wording is unclear. This is how I would word it:

Hi,

Thank you very much for being the first one to bring me a marriage proposal from your close relative. Referring any proposal is indeed a very big responsibility. Even close relatives may not wish to come forward and do this. But you did.

I would like to give you a big thanks for having such confidence in me. I am really happy that I am in the good books of my sister. Thank you so much for being so supportive. Regardless of the end result, gaining your confidence truly makes me happy.

Chandrasekhar Reddy · Answer

Yes. First one is correct. Thank you so much for your reply.

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