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Chandrasekhar Reddy Posted 10 years ago
Grammar

Is my sentence correct?

I have attached a video to the email. Video is not corrupt. Please let me know if you encounter any issues while playing the video.
  

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Two considerations: 1) You've mentioned video three times in three sentences. Is there a pronoun you can use at least one to substitute the word out and avoid repetition? 2) Compare the second time you say "Video" to the third time.

— BenAldridge0

  • Two considerations: 1) You've mentioned video three times in three sentences.
  • Is there a pronoun you can use at least one to substitute the word out and avoid repetition?
  • 2) Compare the second time you say "Video" to the third time.
  • It's not the capitolization, but do you notice how you expressed them differently?
  • Remember, this "video" is something that you specific in your first sentence.
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Two considerations:

1) You've mentioned video three times in three sentences. Is there a pronoun you can use at least one to substitute the word out and avoid repetition?

2) Compare the second time you say "Video" to the third time. It's not the capitolization, but do you notice how you expressed them differently? Remember, this "video" is something that you specific in y
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Chandrasekhar Reddy I have attached a video to the with this email. As far as I know, the video file is not corrupt. Please let me know if you encounter any issues while playing the video.
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BenAldridge0at least once
BenAldridge0capitolization capitalization
BenAldridge0this "video" is something that you specific in from your first sentence.
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Sorry for the mistakes, and thank you for the corrections.
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BenAldridge02) Compare the second time you say "Video" to the third time. It's not the capitalization, but do you notice how you expressed them differently? Remember, this "video" is something that you specific in your first sentence.
Remember, this "video" is something that you specified in your first sentence. (I think you wrongly typed specific
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